Comments on: Confessions and Stuff

By: Wonderfriend

Wonderfriend — Sat, 17 Jul 2010 20:49:32 +0000

In reply to lucy. Thanks for subscribing! :)

By: Wonderfriend

Wonderfriend — Sat, 17 Jul 2010 20:33:47 +0000

I know, I can’t help but like the crazy mom! She might have to make a return one of these days, because I think she’d be a lot of fun to write. I have her pictured and feel like I know her.

Thanks for the kind words!

By: ericka @ alabaster cow

ericka @ alabaster cow — Sat, 17 Jul 2010 20:26:37 +0000

oh wow you’ve really done a remarkable job with this! it reads easily, I feel for your main character and really, I kinda like her mom lol! Wonderful job and thanks for posting!

By: lucy

lucy — Sat, 17 Jul 2010 07:09:31 +0000

Very entertaining. The whole time I wanted to know what the hell the mom had done to get on the news and the answer did not disappoint. Hilarious! And crazy. And funny because I spent my day at a farmer’s market. Good stuff. I found you through TRDC and subscribing.

By: Jess S

Jess S — Sat, 17 Jul 2010 02:00:16 +0000

Stopping by from TRDC. I love how you leave hints and slowly lead up to the actual incident, keeping the reader guessing. Just what the hell did her mom do? Thumbs up!

By: Wonderfriend

Wonderfriend — Sat, 17 Jul 2010 00:12:43 +0000

Thanks, ladies, for the kind comments. I loved reading everyone’s submissions – great way to spend a Friday! I look forward to reading more.

By: Elizabeth Flora Ross

Elizabeth Flora Ross — Fri, 16 Jul 2010 23:36:22 +0000

I think this one is my favorite. You haven’t given any physical description of the mother, but I can just picture her. At the end when you describe the accident, I am picturing her! Awesome!

By: Alexandra

Alexandra — Fri, 16 Jul 2010 17:48:41 +0000

I’m excited about TRDC, too. Time to get off my duff, and quit dreaming.

I really enjoyed this b/c of how much you hinted at with your conversations.

This was well done, for what you say is a first attempt. Very well done.

I look forward to reading more!

By: Smee

Smee — Fri, 16 Jul 2010 15:58:59 +0000

This snippet had me rolling. It’s such a small space in time but there is so much information there, and it is extremely well written. I love it!

By: Adelle @ ready...GO!...get set

Adelle @ ready...GO!...get set — Fri, 16 Jul 2010 15:42:43 +0000

oh my gosh – I am totally blown away by the talent that is already in TRDC. Unbelievable! Breathtaking!

I don’t write fiction – ever – so this is just mind-boggling to see how you can just pull this out of your noggin’ on a whim. I want to read more! Thank you for sharing this!